Saturday, July 26, 2008

COMMENTS..JULY 22 -26 2008

Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 01:14

@john ralph..sabi ko mag kantutan na tayo pag balik ko dyan sa pinas

@odont

right now I'm feeling pressured with my extension application here...and honestly..i can't write with such pressure...let us wait till wednesday...thanks...



Follow up: odont [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 01:20

ok, good luck to your application.... by the way.. paki balik naman character ni bernie..di naman sya namatay sa previous chapter mo eh kaya I think pwede pa syang isama uli sa story.. tnx



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 01:22

honestly..alam ko namatay na sya..hanapin ko ha...sa book 2....nabanggit sya...



Follow up: alamo2003 [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 01:34

fox bakit yong blogspot mo hindi na updated?



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 01:36

give me till wednesday...



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 03:29

nasaan ka ba fox ngaun,,,,



Follow up: UnGazME [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 10:16

goodluck sau fox...ingat kung san ka man!

thnaks for the continued story...



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 11:33

loner...melbourne australia...

eto kinukulit ko na ang immigration...isang lang hinihingi ko..extension or not..hindi pa maka decide 2 weeks na..lahat apektado ..lahat ng pending ko..tigil....pati itong book...hay...let's hope for the best..kahit san naman okay ako ehh...miss ko na din ang pinas.....



Follow up: ghaerslock [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 12:15

gandang katawan...love it...hehehe



Follow up: yaoming [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 12:34

KA-INIP....



Follow up: iyotero [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 12:54

fox hindi namatay si bernie sa book 2 magkasama sila ni joseph para sana iligtas si Jake or Rey



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 13:07

hmm...honestly...I know I killed him somewhere...pag may time ako ha...nasira kasi yung copy and paste ko..

meron ba dito na naka word document..yung buong episode? please volunteer....



Follow up: dyingYOUNG [msg] [block!]
22 Jul 2008, 16:19

pasintabi po...

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These kits are set to target the general population, especially those who have or had risky behaviors that could lead to HIV Infection.

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reading takes 10 minutes...

this morning, they did a sample to me for quality control...

the RESULT is REACTIVE/POSITIVE for HIV Type 1...

high tech na siya! hahaha!

NOTE: If the result is positive/reactive, they will do CONFIRMATORY Test by forwarding your blood sample to San Lazaro Hospital...

Please ask for Pre and Post Test Counseling! It is mandated by the LAW!



Follow up: chivasregal [msg] [block!]
23 Jul 2008, 02:38

@dying young

SPAMMER

SPAMMER

SPAMMER

GET THE HELL OUT!



Follow up: JayEm® [msg] [block!]
23 Jul 2008, 12:19

^up sa mga fans ng parausan.. kahit wala pang update... busy pa si fox....



Follow up: hot_andrew21 [msg] [block!]
23 Jul 2008, 12:23

fox...di pa rin ba tapos problem u?...



huhuhuhuhu



huhuhuhu



asan na ang kalibugan dito...wahahahaha



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Follow up: yaoming [msg] [block!]
23 Jul 2008, 14:44

SANA MAY POSTING NA SI FOX MAMAYA






KA-INIP



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
23 Jul 2008, 19:22

well hindi na approve extension ko
so either i exit via new zealand.or go back to pinas for now..and come back....

at least nakuha ko na answer..and now I can do some action....pero malamang maka uwi ako ng pinas...



Follow up: andrieu12 [msg] [block!]
23 Jul 2008, 19:26

sorry to hear that fox



Follow up: gang_xian [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 00:25

nung nabanggit sa book one yun manansala bldg feeling ko kasama ko mga characters sana sa unit ko na lng ginawa yun settings ... hindi man ako mahilig mag comment sa gawa mo fox... bilib ako sa yo sa bilis ng likha mong pagiisip at pagsusulat... kahit hindi pa updated ok lng basta maayos mo na problem mo dyan ....

brothers lets give our fox a big hand..... the best



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 02:13

guys panurin nyo poh 'toh...
please... thank you...


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imean ung bago mag ys,,, thank you poh...


@fox... sige pagigihan mo lang ang paggawa.. GOGOGOGO

fox...
whahahahahhahwhahaha



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 02:14

guys panurin nyo poh 'toh...
please... thank you...


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tanggalin nyo lang pu ung space _________^


imean ung bago mag ys,,, thank you poh...


@fox... sige pagigihan mo lang ang paggawa.. GOGOGOGO

fox...
whahahahahhahwhahaha



Follow up: chok_muffin [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 02:35

papa fox wala pa din ba... dito mo na ba tatapusin yan sa pinas



Follow up: Bhourge [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 11:36

HEY MGA BRO BAKA GUSTO NYO BUY NG DVD COPY NG SYBIL IAHVE A COPY ALREADY.... PM NYO NA LNG PO AKO SA YM JORDANHILL12@YAHOO.COM



Follow up: JayEm® [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 21:01

ay ganun ba fox? pero di at least ay makakauwi ka na rin... di ba gusto mo rin naman umuwi...



Follow up: Oragon2 [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 21:55

YEHEY BALIKBAYAN NA SI FOX



Follow up: john ralph§ [msg] [block!]
24 Jul 2008, 22:49

@john ralph..sabi ko mag kantutan na tayo pag balik ko dyan sa pinas


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ano daw ulet?????????????



Follow up: mikee1983 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 00:30

sana tapusin na angstiry kasi di naman regular ang update ng mga chapter nakakabagot mag antay..sometimes its such a waste of time logging into the site expecting na may fresh chapter only to find out na wala pala.....a good story needs spontaneous updates(onlien stories) ..ang hirap sundan ng storya kasi matagal bago mag update.TO THE AUTHOR; i like the flow of the story at first pero nong tumagal eh nakakawalang gana na at nakakainis kasi you need to review pa bago makagawa ng chapter though this is just your past time pero sana if you cant handle the sked of updating chapter eh iniklian mo na lang ,somehow your comment sa mga pinoy movies and scriptwritters eh bumabalik sa iyo..matagal ang story etc...hope youll realize that...and to the avid follower of this story PEACE alam ko ull be mad but this is just my honest opinion..alam ko naiinis din kayo



Follow up: yaoming [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 01:13

I SOMEHOW AGREE TO MIKEE1983

BITIN ANG KWENTO AT ABANGAN LAGI NG UPDATE -- PERO WALA. KA-INIP....

UYYY FOX MAG-TYPE KA NA



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 02:22

fox still waiting...



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 02:37

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THANK YOU...



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 02:57

since nagiging brutal kayo pwes brutalan na...

first of all..did I say for all of you to read the chapters here? NOT!

did I beg anyone to read my story? NOT!

am I being paid here to post a story? NOT

so what the fuck?

anne rice needs a fucking year to two to finish a book...here you have a daily updates before...kaya nga ako nag strike ehh...gusto ko mawala yung uma asa na may daily updates....because I feel pressured...and yes..with the book ..medyo humahaba na...and I need credibility....so updating the book is essential....not just typing it everyday....

nobody can dictate to me when to update a chapter...because you don't pay me.. and perhaps ..i can afford to pay you to work for me...so please don't test my status...if i can type a story about corporate battles..don't you think i had that experience as well? please be very careful because I can throw anybody out the window if I want to....and I'm not kidding...I can throw you out the 20th floor and kill you without any question ask....

Now...those who doesn't agree with me can just get out...and I mean now!!....and for those who think that I 'm a fucking whore..think twice...I can pay people to satisfy me in bed even though people are dying to make love with me...and most specially I don't need any fucking attention or recognition...this is my pastime...a form of art...and you cannot compel art...it is done with intuition and inspiration...too bad..nobody can afford me...because I am very expensive...



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 02:59

eh di nakatikim kayo ng "MONICA" !!



Follow up: epalskie1 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 03:03

hahaha! go fox! sabi ko nga nga ba, well I'll just PM you what's in my mind and I dnt know if you'll be surprised.

hehehe! Go, go, go!!!! :P



Follow up: JayEm® [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 03:04

hala! nagalit na si fox!



Follow up: epalskie1 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 03:05

hahaha! pagpasensyahan ang mga PG sa libreng storya, mga dud! wag na kau mag maganda, isipin nyo na lng, ang News paper nga me bayad, maliban sa LIBRE sa MRT... d2 libre din storya, kaya wag na mag inarte!

dami nyong alam, daming sinasabi! mga tae! bwahahaha



Follow up: sweet rock [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 03:39

fox. basta.. dito lang kami..maghihintay sa updates mo..



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 04:01

thanks sweet rock plus the others that I replied via PM...

yes...sometimes..you have to slap a trout to wake them up....right now I'm busy...taking care of leaving all my responsibilities here for the fucking construction.....

I spoke with jake....and kinuha na daw sya ng ABS to appear in My girl season 2....so artista na pala sya...and yes...we are still very much in love..although we can't be together....like my fucking story....this is what keeps me going....pero alam ko somehow in the end...magiging kami pa din....like boy and rey...



Follow up: mikee1983 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 14:41

to fox.....im am not questioning your credibility or your capability of paying something.irrelevant reaction bout my comment.........yeah this is for free,anne rice took 2 years bago nabuo ang isang book but then shes ANNE RICE( before you forget)..hehehehe dami mong supporters!!! once you post stories here,you have to be open to any criticism or comment may it be good or bad.....ayan baka magalit ka naman baka sabihin mo naman na kaya mong magtapon ng tao from the 20th floor or kaya mong magbayad to satisfy you.......hay .........to the supporters of fox relax lang kayo wag masyadong sipsip kay fox ok..ayan dadami na naman ang mag react



Follow up: Oragon2 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 17:28

AGREE WITH FOX AND MIKEE...DAMI KASI ATAT AT SIPSIP DITO, PARANG KUNG SINO MAG DEMAND...MAGBENTA NA LANG KYO NG DVD TULAD NG ISA DYAN, OR MAGPROMOTE NG YOUTUBE VID NIYA NA EWAN... HEHE

AGREE WID FOX - DONT SACRIFICE QUALITY WITH SPEED... TAKE TIME TO PAUSE, RELAX, THINK, THEN WRITE AGAIN... PARA BETTER STORY PA LUMABAS LATER... HOORAY, UUWI NA SI FOX!



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 17:41

lasing ako kagabi...dami ko palang nasabi dito..saka sa mga ka chat ko..sorry...

kita kita nalang tayo sa dampa..para isang kitaan nalang lahat....



Follow up: Bhourge [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 18:53

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Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 23:00

Paghihigante ni Monica..

Matapos ng interview ni Monica ay parati sya asa front page ng mga headlines sa dyaryo. Ginamit nya ito para kumita sya sa mga interviews at para sumikat na din.

Nilapitan sya ng mga madre at mga civil oriented groups para protektahan sa Military...and feeling nila eh si Monica ang Biktima...

Natuto na din sya umarte sa harap ng camera...sa pag tulo ng luha sa isang mata...at timing para sa sabay ng pag tulo ng luha sa parehas na mata..

Natuwa si Monica sa mga attention na binigay sa kanya...ng mga press, publiko at kung sino sino....at parati mo syang makikita sa TV...

"panahon na po para wakasan itong militarization sa ating bansa..ang mga ma pang abuso na militar....ang kanilang karahasan"

sabay tutulo ang kanyang luha sa harap ng mga camera....

Nag usap si Richard at boy sa opisina sa Pacific Star..

"Boy...sa tingin mo may kinalaman itong si Monica talaga"

"Well kilala ko sya...medyo may credibilidad naman...saka kilala naman talaga nya si Jake "

"ikaw..naniniwala ka bang si jake si mark?"

"ilang beses na natin napag usapan yan richard"

"pwes sagutin mo tanong ko?"

"siguro ....OO....Yes..."

"at mahal mo pa din sya?"

"OO sige...PARA MATIGIL KA NA ...parati nalang tayo paulit ulit sa tanong na yan"

"boy sorry...you know what my feelings are"

"yes..and you should know mine too...nasasaktan pa din ako...ilang beses na akong sinaktan nyan....kung sya nga si Jake Ramos na dating Rey at naging Mark...."

napaluha si boy ....at yumuko....tinignan lang sya ni Richard na naka upo....walang magawa si Richard...hindi nya alam kung mag seselos sya o maawa kay boy....litong lito sya ...kaya umupo nalang sya at pinabayaan si boy...

"putang inang Jake yan....hayop sya...ilang beses nya na akong sinaktan..tapos eto...bilang Mark..ginago nanaman nya ako" habang patuloy sa pag iyak si boy....

"so gantihan natin"

"huh"

"gantihan natin.....ano malabo sa sinabi ko?..yes or no"

"pano?"

"madali yan..may pera tayo...we can destroy him..that asshold..who destroyed your whole being..."

hindi umimik si boy...nag isip sya ng malalim....hindi nya alam isasagot nya kay Richard...

"is it a yes or no....gusto mo gumanti...pwes gamitin moko boy...gamitin mo itong companya.....we can pay people to destroy him"

"bahala ka richard"

"aba..hindi pwede yan. boy..alam ko mahal mo..baka mamaya ipapatay ko yan..eh magalit ka sakin"

"gantihan mo lang..wag mo naman ipapatay"

"so you really still care about that asshole..sige..I'll be gentle.."

"so pano mo gagantihan"

"let's start with monica...since marami syang alam kay mark or jake..then let's set up a meeting with her...probably....we can hire her..since she has work for my dad before...I still hate her..don't get me wrong..she's a fucking bitch....pero..we need her on our side right now....tama na yang media blitz nya at masa masa....katarantaduhan yan..."

"sige " sabat ni boy

"Let's offer her a job..like PR manager of our company....she will be a good asset for the company lalo na..mabango sya ngayon sa publiko diba"

"yeah...right...pwede richard"

"well let's set up a meeting with her then okay....and we will include her in our plans....to get back at Jake or Mark ...whatever his name is..."

"basta richard...wag mong papatayin...I just want to get even with him....and this time...wala na akong awa para sa kanya hayop sya...binaboy nya ko..bababuyin ko din sya"

to be continued...



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 23:20

Paghihiganti ni Monica continuation...

Tumahimik muna si jordan habang asa Bangkok....nanibago sya sa mga tanawin..at natuwa sya sa mga kanyang nakita...lalo na sa Phatphong...kung san..mabibili mo lahat ng aliw sa isang gabi...

Nag uusap pa din sila ni Carla...at ina update sya ni Carla sa mga nangyayari sa Pilipinas....Naka Schedule na si Jordan for a surgery sa muka sa Bangkok Hospital...maraming cliente kaya kailangan sya pumila sa dami ng nag papa gamot dun...besides sa mga thai na gusto maging babae eh marami din tourista na nag papa opera dahil sa ka murahan ng presyo at ganda ng ospital....

Ang hindi alam ni Jordan ay....nag pa assign si Udo dun sa bangkok hospital...dahil na din mataas na sweldo ang inalok sa kanya...at sya lang ang nakaka gawa ng isang perfect na hugis na katawan babae ...pati na din sa ibaba...na talaga namang hindi mo mahahalata na dating lalake ang iyong naka talik....

Binigay kay Udo ang profile ng mga mag papa opera...at dun nya nakita ang muka ni Mark...pero iba na ang pangalan ....at nakita nya na "JORDAN".

Dun na sya nag taka...dito nya na buko na nag papanggap lang pala si Mark nung kausap sya sa travellers inn sa Makati....at nag papatunay na hindi pa pala ito magaling bilang Mark....at natuklasan nya...na ang pangalan ng bagong anyo ni Mark ay si Jordan....

Nag isip si Udo....ng malalim...mahal nya pa din si Mark kahit papano kahit na iniwan sya nito at pinag palit kay boy nung mga panahon na yun...at ramdam na ramdam nya na hindi na sya kailangan nito sa buhay nya kaya nya tinanggap ang alok ng Bangkok Hospital....at para na din maka kilala sya ng ibang Asian na lalake....

Ang ginawa ni Udo...nag pa schedule sya ng interview...kasi minsan...talagang ini interview ang pasyente para malaman kung talagang desidido ito sa pag oopera ng kanilang mga ipa babago..dahil magiging permanente na ito....

"nurse...please call this person...Jordan...and set up an interview....ASAP...I think he lives in Bayoike Sky right now..."

"okay Doc...I will have it done..."

":but...set it up in the surveilance room...I won't do the interview...give me a psychiatrist....and I will just watch from the one way mirror"

"okay doc..."

"thanks..just inform me when"

Nung gabing din yun....nag punta si Udo sa Pratunam...para silipin si Jordan...na miss na din ni Udo si Mark...

Inantay ni Udo ito buong gabi dun sa Lobby ng bayoike sky sa 8th floor ...pero wala syang nakita...nag kape si Udo dun sa coffee shop sa gilid ng lobby na may view...nag antay pa din sya...at umabot ng 12 midnight na....ay may isang pinoy na lalake na lasing na dumating galing sa elevator....

"oh my god" sabi ni Udo..

hindi sya makapaniwala....lasing na lasing si Jordan...at ibang iba na ang mga mata nito...

"he can't be mark...he has transformed again..."

pina nood lang ni Udo ito..hanggang pasakay ulit dun sa elevator na paakyat sa 70th floor....kung san ang mga suites nila ....

Umuwi na si Udo...alam nya..na dapat syang may gawin...mahal nya si Mark...at hindi nya ito pwedeng pabayaan....hindi nya alam ang nangyayari kay Mark...pero alam nya..na dapat nya itong iligtas....

Kinabukasan...



Follow up: alexis15 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 23:25

wow ako ata una nkatapos ahh,., hehe



Follow up: alexis15 [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 23:26

waahh ako una nkatapos magbasa,., nhi2rapan ako mag basa,., jordan kc [angalan ng ex ko,. huhu,..,, ganda ng story fox,., mwah



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 23:49

"Carla..Jordan..ano na mga balita dyan"

"eto..pinag hahanap ka pa din...at si Monica na bestfriend mo...panay ang dada sa news..at sa media...."

"hayaan mo sya..."

"do you miss me?"

"Jordan..alam mo sa dami ng plano natin...nagagwa mo pang mag sabi ng ganyan?"

"oo naman..bakit...eh miss kita talaga..nalasing nga ako kagabi...na isip kita..."

"talaga lang ha...."

"oo naman...teka....ano na presyo ng Mega Pacific? bagsak na ba? or pinipilit pa din umakyat?"

"jordan nakaka bawi sila...binibili ng mga umalis...asa P 1.60 na ulit"

"hmm..okay...sige...short selling pa din tayo....ubusan kung ubusan...teka..may naisip ako"

"ano yun?"

"sabihin mo kay general..para bumaba ang stock market....gumawa ng ingay o gulo?"

"like what..ano nanaman yan Jordan..ayoko na ng patayan?"

"basta...mag pasabog ng bomba...sa Makati....sa bus o sa MRT...."

"tangina mo Jordan..may mamatay nanaman nyan ehh..ayoko!"

"huh...eh pano babagsak ang market kung walang gulo?"

"pwede naman mag negative news tayo..diba..we have connections sa media...palalabasin lang natin yang mga inflation rate....na hirap na ang mga taong bayan...."

"okay....ganito..mag pasabog ng bomba si general..pero walang mamamatay....tapos mag kidnap ulit ng chinese na high profile...para yung foreign funds ma dismaya....siguradong cell yan..sabay mo..tapos sabihin mo sa press..exaggerate nila sobra ha..make it headline....okay"

"shet..ayoko ng ganito....Jordan...ayoko na....hindi ko to kaya.."

"ano ka ba naman Carla...this is for Jake.."

"you always use jake"

"diba..mahal mo sya"

"but not like this...please Jordan...get me out of this mess"

"sige sige...I will think of a plan..and call you....okay"

"thanks Jordan..."

Samantala...sa opisina ni Richard at Boy sa Pacific Star....dumating si Monica...dahil sa mga pera na nakukuha nya sa interview..medyo magarbo nanaman ito....takaw attention nanaman ang suot nya...shocking red na damit...na may ternong sumbrero at scarf kahit na super init ng mga panahon na yun.....

"Welcome Monica"

"Nice meeting you Richard....and Ted...or boy?...whatever...hahahahaha"

"hay nako Monica..mataray ka pa din..." sabat ni Richard..

"of course dahlin....I'm a celebrity now...as you can see...everybody loves me...."

"oo nga..magaling ka nga umarte sa interviews mo" sabat ni richard..

"bakit inggit ka..pwes..umarte ka din..diba...kanya kanyang drama lang naman tayo sa mundong ito diba Richard...like your dad...full of dramas"

"puta..don't include my dad here"

"okay..sorry dahlin..."

"chard..relax lang...."sabat ni boy

"alam mo monica...mainit talaga dugo ko sayo"

"pwes...get a bucket of ice dahlin..palamigin natin " mataray na sabat ni Monica...

kamuntikan ng suntukin ni Richard si Monica pero pinigilan ito ni boy....

"Monica..we are here to offer you a job for Mega Corp"

"ang sweet nyo naman....hmm...I can smell something here....kayo na ba" biglang buka ng kanyang bag para kumuha ng sigarilyo....

susuntukin na sana ni Richard...pero pinigilan ulit ito ni boy....

"okay..i'll stop my mouth....okay..sealed...let's go with the meeting"

"yan...dapat noh...yang bungaga mo talaga..sarap sapakin"

tumahimik lang si monica....at tumingin sa bintana....

"Monica...we have a common enemy here...si Jake or Mark or Jordan..whoever"

"okay..shoot"

"now..if we combine our forces..then we can fight him"

"yeah....and"

"and we will offer you a job...that you can't refuse...you will be our PR manager for this company...free board andloding of your choice...car..driver..and a salary of P500,000/month....just help us get this jake/mark or jordan..."

"sige..madali naman akong kausap...."

"so you will sign the contract?"

"of course dahlin..it's hard to be jobless nowadays...and besides..I used to work here long long time ago..hindi ka pa tule nun Richard..hahahahaha"

"shut up monica!" sabat ni Richard...

"okay...but we need more than that..."

"what do you mean Monica.."

"matalino yang si jake or mark...at nagbabago yan ng anyo....psycho ata yan....and...remember..they have JRC realty ni Carla....at may na aamoy ako"

"what Monica?"

"teka...don't you think I should sign the contract..before I move on"

"sure sure....chard..get a pen....here Monica..sign here..."

"I hope everything is perfect in this contract?"

"of course monica..."

"well then...."

Pinirmahan ni Monica..ang kontrata....

"ganito...I have a feeling...kaya nag resign yung nanay ni jake...ay dahil gusto nila ibenta ang shares nila sa Mega Pacific..."

"tapos..ano gagawin nila" sabat ni Richard..

"surprise....para pataubin itong kumpanya nyo at Mega Pacific"

"what?..how can they do that"

"you're so naive....first...they can buy your shares in the market....and attack your plans..or directly compete with you guys"

"parang ang dali Monica...you just can't crack down two big real estate companies in the market"

"alam mo richard...yes.. I know..but don't under estimate Jake...he is very intelligent....alam mo yan boy...."

at yumuko si boy..sabay tingin kay Richard....

"now....we need to get the Umalis on our side..they are having a problem right now..their stocks is under attack...by an unknown buyer....so they really need some funds right now..to stabilize their shares in the market"

"but Monica..sila kalaban namin..how can I help them?"

"stupid ka din talaga Richard..now is the time....dahil...they will fall under your spell...kasi tinulungan mo sila...and you can penetrate their company.....and you will really need it...."

"matalino ka din Monica...hindi ka lang puta...may utak ka din pala"

"oo...at ikaw. din...hindi ka lang puta...mangagamit ka pa!"

at pinigil nanaman ni boy si Richard at Monica..na kamuntikan nanaman mag banggaan...

"wait wait...hindi tayo ang mag kaaway dito...meron tayong kalaban okay!"

"sige..boy..palayasin muna yan..baka masipa ko pa yan"

"no need to escort me boy....take care of your handsome boss....you needs your attention...bye girls"

at umalis na si Monica....nag isip si Richard..kahit galit na galit sya..alam nya tama ang mga advice nito sa kanya....at dahil mahal nya si boy..handa ito gawin lahat..kahit lunukin si Monica..para lang maihigante si boy......



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
25 Jul 2008, 23:58

Samantala sa Bayoike Sky hotel sa Bangkok..

"carla"

"yes Jordan"

"I've got the solution..."

"really what?"

"get Michael..out of JRC in Iloilo...."

"huh?"

"yes....get him...for your replacement"

"pano Iloilo operations natin"

"then close it for now..stagnant naman yun ehh...kaya na ng ibang staff yun...."

"what about Bernie?"

"get him down there too..in Manila..."

"okay....and what do I do?"

"come here....in Bangkok?"

"what? "

"yes you here....so you can help me recuperate from my operation..kailangan ko din ng tulong dito Carla..besides..you requested for it right..."

"Jordan...ano gagawin ko dyan"

"Carla...so you can relax..and take care of me...okay..no more dirty jobs for you...get a complete turnover for Michael and Bernie...then go to Bangkok right away...."

"wow...abrupt ka talaga Jordan mag isip...."

"kaya nga Jordan ako ehh....diba..."

"sige ...I'll call them up...bernie and michael..and bring them here..."

"Carla..one more thing...."

"what Jordan.."

"the tape...pasasabugin natin yan at the proper time...pag nabenta na natin yung shares sa Mega Pacific...and launching ng JRC realty sa stock market...and we will need Joseph for the campaign"

"oo..Joseph can help us...sikat na sikat na sya ngayon..."

"I know....so lets get this done!"


next Chapter 16...Bangkok...



Follow up: therapist567 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 00:01

wow!!!! bumabawi ka fox...... ang galing naman



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 00:03

I deleted the ones the I wrote about bangkok..so eto na yung continuation part 2 ng paghihiganti ni Monica...

siguro tutuloy ko eto sa Manila...or subic..I'll be quite busy in the next 2-3 days...before I fly back...turnover of responsibility..



Follow up: therapist567 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 00:04

have asfe trip goin back to manila fox.....



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 00:21

therapist..thnx...

at least natapos na din ang rollercoaster ride....

I have mixed emotions right now...before I posted the first one ..I mean the story..siguro naka 03 drafts ako..tapos binubura ko ulit..hanggang nakuha ko ulit yung momentum ng story...

I don't know why I'm sad...leaving melbourne...samantalang...most of the people that ilove are back in manila..but of course my mom is here....and If I won't come back here in 2 weeks time..then she will join me after 30 days in manila...

Sumaya kasi ako dito...kahit winter...and it's only now that I'm starting to meet new friends....ayoko na kasi bumalik sa lifestyle ko sa manila...na puros kabit at relationship na super gulo...

I don't know again...kung mag dadramahan kami ni jake ....it will be ackward..if ever we will meet...siguro mauuwi sa sex yun agad...gusto ko nga..sa subic nalang ako tumira ng matagal..while waiting for my school here in feb next year...magulo kasi sa manila...ayoko na talaga tumira sa manila...except for fitness again....nako..mga hiphop kong mga kalaban...andyan na ulit ako...

hopefully everything turns out good...and well....



Follow up: therapist567 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 00:26

i just hope it turn out well for you..... all i can say, im also tryin to look for myself... i was talkin to a friend na psychiatrist.... normal lng na may depression at times....



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 01:02

hmmm...

gumaganda na ha...


ano kayang susunod na kabanata?



Follow up: loNer15 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 01:12

hahahaha



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 12:45

nag tataka lang ako..bakit kayo nahihiya mag post dito...bakit lahat via PM .....kasi minsan same questions..and I have to answer the same thing...so I just hope that you will post your questions and comments here...or sa blog...you have comments portion over there....

I'm coming back tuesday morning in Manila...if some of you wants to meet up for a drink..I'm open to it...sana sabay sabay na...because I might leave again by aug 13 back to melbourne...dampa QC will be a good place..mura pa...pero I'm not into dates or SEB...kasi marami na akong problema dyan...I already have 3...

I



Follow up: pheobus [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 12:50

hehehe...question po...aside from the name of the company is may mega...are you related sa pacific star na travel agency here in manila???hehehehe...ask lang poh...



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 13:04

Chapter 16 Bangkok

Nag iisip si Jordan...so naisipan nya...mag tour nalang muna habang nag iisip sya ng malalim....medyo humihina na ang personality nya....at nararamdaman nya na bumabalik na yung jake/mark personality na pilit ng lumalabas dahil sa walang pangagailangan na laban ang katauhan nila.....sa pamamagitan ni Jordan....

Naisipan nyang mag river cruise nung gabing yun.....

"Sir what type of river cruise do you want"

"are there different types?"

"yes..we have American buffet, MIx-Asian, Thai, Indian, and seafood buffet"

"okay..I"ll get the Thai Buffet"

"Okay sir..they will pick you up at 6:30 at the lobby...and you will be taken to Shangrila hotel near the river...that is where you will board"

"okay..thanks...how much"

"that's 1,200 baht"

at binayaran ni Jordan ang tour agency sa gilid ng hotel....

Habang asa cruise si Jordan....nag iisip sya...kung ano mangyayari sa buhay nya..or kung maalala nya pa din ang mga ito kapag gumaling na at naging isang tao na lahat sila ni rey, jake, mark at sya....

Naalala nya si Carla...mahal na mahal nya si Carla..sya lang ang nakakapag palabas ng kabutihan sa kanyang pagkatao....at dahil dito ay naisipan nyang tawagan si Carla since delayed ng isang oras ang bangkok so medyo tapos na si carla sa work nya sa manila...



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 13:09

@phoebus

this is a fiction...it's not real life...of course I have knowledge of what I'm talking about..or the places...or the jobs that they're doing....pero imbento lang yung mga company name and of course the characters..



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 13:17

"so carla..what are you doing?"

"well just spoke with bernie, michael and joseph...alam mo naman Jordan that they don't know you....I simply cannot tell them the complete story..all they know is that we found you...as jake...at lahat sila masaya...."

"well I'm not jake..I'm jordan..I don't feel anything for them"

"I know Jordan...pero diba..I think you know..jake and joseph had an affair..and if I'm correct...diba nag sex si jake and bernie?"

"Yes....do you want the details?"

"wag na"

"of course not dahil masasaktan ka diba?"

"stop it!"

"bakit ganun ka carla..kahit kay jake..kapag na corner ka na sa conversation...parating sagot mo " stop it"

"Jordan...stop arguing with me...it's a lot of work....me making up stories of what happened to jake....and of course..the plan here in manila...."

"okay okay....just make it quick...and I"ll be waiting for you...siguro I will delay for the operation...until you get here.."

"yes...give me 2 more weeks..to fully train them....and the plans that we have"

"that's alright"

"Jordan....gagawin ko lahat ng sinasabi mo...but promise me one thing"

"what carla.."

"don't destroy Jake...."

"okay Carla you have my word...I won't"

"thanks Jordan...so where are you now"

"sa river..taking a cruise and a buffet dinner"

"wow..sarap dyan..."

"yeah...and they have a cultural show right now kaya maingay"

"okay..enjoy your stay"

kinabukasan....



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 13:18

okay..for the sake of it...buburahin ko nalang y ung incident na may nagsabing namatay si bernie..alam ko..asa book 2 yun...somewhere...sige..buhayin natin si bernie..since this is an interactive book....due to public demand....



Follow up: hot_andrew21 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 15:01

buhay na naman...



yahoo!




luc you fox...



magiging busy na naman ako dahilsa thread na to...



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Follow up: watits [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 15:04

nice



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 15:13

punta muna ako gym..so no update till tonight okay?



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 16:11

KInabukasan..sa office ng JRC realty sa jupiter...nag meeting sila Carla Bernie Michael at Joseph

"thank you all for coming"

"carla..napaka formal mo naman"

"well...ewan ko...pero...I have to..medyo marami tayong dapat pag usapan"

"we're listening Carla" sabat ni joseph

"joseph..number 1 pala yung tele serye mo ahh ..congrats.."

"thanks Carla...sympre..kayo humahawak sakin..."

"well..it's your assistant..ako alam mo naman...busy sa maraming bagay"

"we understand Carla...."

"well okay...let's get down to business..."

"shoot" sabat ni MIchael...

" well these past few months...geez...parang 1 month pa lang ehh....maraming naganap....and I mean...super dami..hahahahaha...well hindi ko na sasabihin lahat....natawa ako dun ahh....hay.....anyway....siguro nabalitaan nyo na we were looking for jake..and we had a lead"

"yes..Carla..ano balita?" excited na tanong ni Joseph....

"ahhhh....we found him....and" mahinahon na sagot ni Carla na parang confuse....kung matutuwa sya sa news o hindi....

"what...when....where?" sabat ni joseph

"oo nga Carla...asan si Jake" sabat ni Bernie...

"well we found him...then lost him again...then found him again....then slightly lost him again"

"ANOH CARLA! PAKI EXPLAIN?" sabat ni Bernie

" This is hard...shet how can I explain this....basta Jake is alive.....but..."

"what carla" sabat ni joseph...

"he is sick..yan...okay....I have to tell you the truth....I don't wanna lie or something...."

"sick with what Carla" sabat ni joseph

"brain joseph....he has a personality disorder...or experiencing multiple personality"

"huh....pano yun" sabat ni Michael

"okay...this is a close door meeting..so sa atin lang talaga ito okay...it will not go out of this room"

"sige Carla..we are listening" sabat ni Joseph....

" He has 4 personalies right now....one is Rey..nung asa probinsya pa ysa....you know that bernie...kasama ka nya nun"

"of course Carla...." sabat ni bernie..

"one is Jake...nung asa cebu na sya....one is Mark...nung after ng baha..nung kamuntikan na tayong lahat mamatay....and the new one....is Jordan....whom we are dealing with right now"

"Wow....then bakit hindi natin sya ipagamot" sabat ni joseph..

"I cannot control Jordan...he has this very strong personality...a combination of jake multiplied by 2...extreme sobra....bago mo sya mahawakan ...alam nya na agad..kaya nga tumakas na sya...asa Thailand sya ngayon"

"what?" sabat ni joseph...

"and here's another bad news....."

"shet.." sabat ni michael...

"nag iba na face nya...he had a reconstructive surgery after the great flood..dahil nasira muka nya..at sinagip sya ng german tourist...si Udo...at dun sya naging mark..."

"wow" sabat ni bernie...

"so.....(pause)....medyo magulo....but still he controls JRC realty...he is our boss and we have to follow him"

"but Carla...he is not our real boss..he is someone else right now"

"yes...he is...he remembers everything....makikilala nya pa din kayong lahat..pero..not feel anything....and for now...he is making right decision..."

"but Carla..he is still not jake"

"jake....hay....where the hell are you?...hahahahaha....bakit bernie, joseph at michael...sa tingin nyo ba...si jake talaga yun....diba..pwede din si rey talaga yun..na naiba din....at nakasama natin...ikaw bernie..kilala mo si rey....diba..iba na si jake at hindi talaga sya si Rey......shet.....pati ako naguguluhan na din...at hindi ko alam gagawin ko...." biglang naiyak si Carla....

"Carla tama na...." niyakap sya ni joseph.....

"joseph...bakit ganito...dati..ang simple lang ng buhay namin ni jake sa cebu...we were happy....after work we drink....and have a good laugh...bakit ngayon ganito na....sobrang hirap...."

"I understand Carla...naintindihan kita....we love him..and yet...hindi natin sya maka piling...."

"joseph...miss na miss ko na yung jake na yun....asan na sya.....asan na yung jake na yun.......na nakaka kwentuhan ko sa bubong ng condo nya....." at humagulgol na si Carla sa shoulder ni Joseph....at naluluha na din si Joseph......

"I know Carla..I really miss him too.....bakit naging complikado lahat ang buhay natin.....tuloy na miss ko din ang Iloilo...."

"oh tama na....lahat tayo mahal si rey jake o kung sino man sya...sige..mag usap tayo..pano natin sya matutulungan" sabat ni bernie...

"right..pano nga...kung ibang tao itong kausap natin" sabat ni Michael...

"well wala..kasi asa thailand sya and due for an operation...sa muka"

"what...again?"

"yes...kasi nga pinag hahanap na sya dito"

"what do you mean Carla" sabat ni joseph..

"Joseph..sya si Mark de guzman na pinag uusapan sa news!!"

"ANO!!" sabat ng tatlo

"my god....anong gulo ito" sabat ni michael

"now alam nyo na....kung gano ka complicated itong buhay na ito....with me alone....."

"well Carla..we are here now...to support you" sabat ni joseph..

"tama Carla..andito na kami..." sabat ni Michael...

"yes...and I'm leaving for Bangkok to be with Jordan"

"sinong Jordan" sabat ni michael

"Si jake yun diba" sabat ni bernie

"yes" sabat ni carla....

"why?" sabat ni joseph..

"because he wants me to take of him during the operation..until ma divide ko na ang task ko dito sa manila"

"like what task Carla" sabat ni MIchael...

"well first the operations...of JRC realty...in the next few months....mag ad campaign tayo..full blast..for JRC realty...and competing with Mega Pacific and Mega Corp"

"Carla..are you dreaming..those are giants" sabat ni michael...

"I know..pero may plano na..right now...jordan is selling his share with Mega Pacific..and all the money there will be used to acquire and relaunch JRC realty.....and we will need youJoseph to endorse...JRC....billboards, commercial..newsprint, lahat...."

"okay lang sakin yun Carla..."

"michael and bernie..you will continue the stocks manuever...like short selling and counter buying for shares of Mega Pacific..that will be daily..monday to friday....plus the operations.....at ikaw Joseph..we will start an ad campaign sa newsprint...like you signing a contract with JRC...as an endorser of condo units and other developments...."

"okay...we get you Carla" sabat ni joseph.....

"so guys...pag dasal nyo ako..sana nga bumalik na si jake....sana ma pwersa ko si Jordan na mag pa gamot...."

"ayaw nya ba?"

"ayaw nya...mawawala daw sya..kapag nagamot si rey or jake....."

"sige Carla ...goodluck sa bangkok mo..at sana mapilit mo na sya mag pagamot.."

"susubukin ko guys okay...pag dasal nyoko...kaya din ako pupunta dun...."

tumahimik anglahat....wala ng nakapag salita....dahil sa complication ng mga ginagawa at dapat gawin pa....magulo....nakaka lito....at ni hindi nila alam kung sino talaga ang boss nila ngayon......

to be continued....



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 16:13

eto talagang paa alis nako...bye...mamaya continue ko habang nag lalaba.....



Follow up: Oragon2 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 16:16

SANA MAY THREESOME SINA BERNIE, JOSEPH AT MICHAEL... MOST AWAITED KO KSI...HEHE



Follow up: foxonfire* [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 19:56

puros sex ka naman oragon...



Follow up: andrieu12 [msg] [block!]
26 Jul 2008, 20:08

hahahahaha maulan kc kaya ganun ung gusto nia

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